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FFM 03 - Countdown

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0:17……

0:16…..


Marshall watched the clock tick down and flashed a wild grin at the woman inside the glass tube beneath.  She had played right into it.

“PLEASE, MARSHALL!” She screamed over the blaring sirens.  “DON’T DO THIS TO ME!”

He spat a dry laugh and shook his head, with his finger over the button.  As soon as the safety countdown was completed, he could finish this.

“It’s you or me, Anya.  Only enough air for one.”

0:02…

0:01…


He mashed the button, opening the airlock.

“I love you, Anya.”  The vacuum sucked away the words, and then Marshall himself.
Flash-Fic-Month July 3, 2015
No challenge.

Decided to do a little drabble today, and kept it to exactly one hundred words.  I don't know if it has the desired effect, but it's all I've got time for, so hey hey. 
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It absolutely had the desired effect, great job!